Post by Deleted on Feb 19, 2006 13:35:53 GMT -5
Unexpected Love: A Max & Abby story
It seems like yesterday my world fell from the sky
It seems like yesterday I didn’t know how hard I could cry
It feels like tomorrow I may not get by
(Abby’s POV)
My life is now a wreck. My dad is dead, My best friend is going to be charged for murder for killing a boy, and my mom is a wreck because of the death of my father. My whole entire world is falling a part. I have no one to lean on. Or do I? His name is… Max Brady and he’s already been there for me even more then my best friend. I can count on him for anything like right now.
(End of POV)
But I will try
I will try
Wipe the tears from my eyes
“Daddy, why did you have to go?” Abby said while still softly crying. What Abby didn’t know was that Max was at her door when he heard her say that. That’s it. He just had to get her out of the house, away from all the drama. “ Abby can I come in?” Max said. Abby, startled as ever hid her stuff the best she could to make sure Max wouldn’t see it. “ Sure Max, come on in.” Abby replied.
I’m beautifully broken
And I don’t mind if you know it
I’m beautifully broken
Max entered and sat next to Abby on her bed. “ Abby I’m going to take you outside of the house just for a while, If you want” Max asked. “ Um, I’m not sure… well what the heck, it might do me some good to go outside and relax” Abby replied. “ Good, lets go right now grab your coat and put on shoes and lets go!” Max said while taking Abby’s hand into his hand and bringing her downstairs. Abby felt this feeling deep inside her almost as if she was blushing!
And I don’t care if I show it
Everyday is a new day
I’m reminded of my past
(Abby’s POV)
Oh my god! Am I blushing? Ah! I am! Does that mean? No, I cant be in love with him yet his heart belongs to Chelsea, my best friend!
(End of POV)
Every time there’s another storm
I know that it won’t last
Every moment I’m filled with hope ‘cause I get another chance
“Max where are you taking me?” Abby asked while they had just left the house a near 5 minutes ago. “ You’ll see, were almost there” Max replied. A few minutes later they got there. It was a beautiful ice skating rink and it hadn’t even been used yet.
But I will try
I will try
Got nothing
Left to hide
“Wow Max! I love it! How did you know I like to skate?” Abby said. “ Well actually, I didn’t know. Anyway, lets go skating! ” Max replied. “ Okay! But we don’t have any skates” Abby asked.
“Yeah we do, I got them ready before I came at you’re house” Max replied. They laced up their skates and started to go skating.
Without the highs and the lows
Where would we go
Where would we go
“Thanks so much Max, for bringing me out here it made me feel way better” Abby said. “ No problem” Max said. “ But, do you mind if we past my dad’s grave for a minute?” Abby asked. “ Sure, it doesn’t bother me at all” Max replied. When they got there Abby kneeled down and saw something. It was a box and in it was a letter Abby read it and choked on her tears she opened the box and there was a necklace in there for her from… her father. “Max, I’ve got to go” Abby said and ran straight to home without Max getting to say bye and without noticing that she had just dropped her letter. Max read it, and understood he too slowly walked to the Deveraux house and knew it was gonna be a long day of Abby crying.
Song credit:
Beautifully broken- Ashlee Simpson
Unexpected Love chap. 2
(Max’s POV)
I finally caught up to her and I made her turn around. She looked like a broken angel with tears coming out of her blue eyes.
“Abby, I know you’re sad I really do understand so please talk to me I want to help” She looked me straight the eyes as I did the same. “ Do you really mean that?” She asked while still in her voice was complete sadness. “ Yeah… I… I do”
(End of POV)
They were so caught up just looking in their eyes that they didn’t notice the speeding car headed straight for them. They quickly turned after they heard a loud horn beeping but it was too late because right after they turned the car hit Abby sending her higher then the light post itself. All Max could do is stare in shock while his best friend landed hard on the ground. After she had landed on the ground, realization hit Max like a wall. He rushed over to her to check if she had a pulse but he had also already noticed that she was unconscious he’d noticed that the car that had hit Abby had stopped and the engine just turned off. He just saw enough in the shadows to see the person who drove the car. It was a girl. Then, she came out of the shadows it was none other then Chelsea!( reminder: she was in jail) Max was in shock, his girlfriend had just hit his best friend with her car!
-“Hi Max! Aren’t you glad to see me?”
-“Hey… um not right now but why did you hit you’re best friend with a CAR!”
-“I did? I didn’t notice you know? Because I was on the phone and checking my calls”
-“Chelsea, honey…. Please explain what the hell are you doing here! You are supposed to be in jail we all know it!”
-“But Max! I missed you so much that I couldn’t wait! I knocked the guard down and stole his keys so I could see you!”
-“Chelsea please let me take that car! I need to bring Abby to the hospital!”
-“What! Now you’re putting you’re best friend 1st before you’re girlfriend! Some boyfriend!”
-“Chelsea! You’re best friend has been hit by a car actually by you! So please let me take the car!”
-“Fine! But you better surprise me at Valentines with something big.”
After she finished that, Max grabbed Abby and got her in the back seat of the car, he took off his jacket, he put his jacket under her head for some sort of pillow and started up the engine and made his way to the hospital while leaving Chelsea to think about what she had done.
At the hospital…
-“Someone help!”
-“Max what happened to Abby?” Lexie asked
-“Abby…she… she got hit by a car”
-“Okay set her down here and go call her family now!”
On the phone….
-Frankie? It’s me Max, can you and a Jennifer come to the hospital right now?”
-“Of course we’ll be right there”
-“Thanks”
Unexpected Love chap. 3
(Abby’s POV)
Where am I? “Abby? Abigail is that you?” that’s what came from some familiar voice but I wasn’t quite sure from who. I looked down and I saw nothing but white, I looked at myself only to find myself in a white dress I was panicked. Was I dead? Is the only question I could ask myself. I was in shocked I couldn’t speak. All I could do was to let my feet lead me where the voice that asked who was there. It took my feet and me quite a while to get close enough to try to see the person. When I got there I was shocked. I couldn’t move, speak, or anything only stand there and be in shock. There, in front of my face and gates was. My daddy, Jack Deveraux.
(End of POV)
At the hospital…
In a matter of minutes Jennifer and Frankie arrived. Jennifer looked like a wreck.
-“Lexie, where’s my baby!”
-“Jen, calm down she’s in stable condition right now and 3 people at a time can come to see her. So I suppose Jen, Frankie and Max can come in right now”
-“Thanks you Lexie”
-“Max stay here for 2 minutes the police have to ask you some questions”
-“Alright”
Jennifer and Frankie followed Lexie to Abby’s room only to have more and more sadness in their faces.
-“Frankie, look at my baby girl. She seems so peaceful”
-“I know Jen, I know.”
With Max and the police…
-“Do you know where this happened?”
-“Yes, I do It happened West on route 413(I just made it up) about 3 km after that tree with the huge arrow on it”
-“One last question, do you have any idea on who hit Abby Deveraux?”
-“I… I do it was… Chelsea Benson”
-“Commander Brady’s daughter? But I was sure she was in prison after being convicted of murder of a little boy”
-“Yes, she was but she told me she escaped from jail to be with me”
-“Gee boy, you have life hard anyway thank you for your time”
-“No problem”
Max was relived to get that off of his chest. Max suddenly felt a hand on his shoulder. It was his brother, Frankie.
-“ Max go on in and see her, me & Jen already went”
-“Thanks”
(Abby’s POV)
Daddy was all I could say. “Abby, honey what are you doing here?” my father asked I myself wasn’t quite sure so that’s what I said. “I can actually answer that question for you. You were hit by a car by Chelsea to be exact.” He answered. He was right, now I was starting to remember. I desperately wanted to hug my dad so I started to go near the gates. “Abby don’t!” Why! I replied why? Didn’t my dad want me to hug him? “ Abby, wait until, you’re… dead”
(End of POV)
In Abby’s room…
Max had just entered the room soon; heartbreak took the toll on him. She looked like she was a broken angel again. Like if he hadn’t even helped her at all.
-“Abby, this is all my fault I should have been there for you! I wasn’t… I’m so sorry can you ever forgive me? No, you can’t I’m going to stay here until you get better and I’ll make sure of it!”
(Abby’s POV)
It had finally hit me I was in heaven. I couldn’t even tell my father from what I completely remembered before I had gotten hit. It was when I found my new necklace from him and I was running away from Max. God, I miss Max so much there’s no way to describe it
I just wish he could hold me in his arms again like he did before I got hit. I wonder how is he doing. I ask my father that; the gate opens, he steps out and tells me to look down. I was scared at the beginning but my courage got up so I looked down. There, I was shocked I saw me, in the hospital bed with Max next to me putting his fingers through my hair. He looked so scared that I was going to die and at the same time he looked disappointed like if he could have protected me more. He looked sad like if he wanted him to take my place. I couldn’t look anymore. I turned away to see my father with only sadness in his eyes like if he read my mind. I ran straight to him without any obstacles in the way and I engulfed him in a hug. Then, I let all my tears come down.
(End of POV)
At the hospital…
Everyone who knows Abby came, with all sadness in their faces. They couldn’t believe that Chelsea out of all people hit her with a car. One at a time but with Max never leaving the room. Everyone had past; almost everyone had gone home except for Max. He didn’t care the only thing right now that he cared about was Abby.
(Max’s POV)
God! I’m so stupid! I think I’m in love with Abby! Why does these feelings come at the time she’s in at the hospital! That’s it! Don’t worry Abby I’ll be back, I promise. I just have something to do at jail.
(End of POV)
As of that Max got up and left for the Salem Prison.
In “Heaven”…
(Abby’s POV)
I finally let go of my father. He told me he had to go. I accepted it, but I didn’t accept that I was dead. No, not yet I saw a forest behind me so I practically ran there. There, I sat down, my back against the tree and started to sing.
She was driving last Friday on her way to Cincinnati
On a snow white Christmas Eve
Going home to see her Mama and her Daddy with the baby in the backseat
Fifty miles to go and she was running low on faith and gasoline
It been a long hard year
She had a lot on her mind and she didn't pay attention
She was going way to fast
Before she knew it she was spinning on a thin black sheet of glass
She saw both their lives flash before her eyes
She didn't even have time to cry
She was sooo scared
She threw her hands up in the air
Jesus take the wheel
Take it from my hands
Cause I can't do this all on my own
I'm letting go
So give me one more chance
To save me from this road I'm on
Jesus take the wheel
It was still getting colder when she made it to the shoulder
And the car came to a stop
She cried when she saw that baby in the backseat sleeping like a rock
And for the first time in a long time
She bowed her head to pray
She said I'm sorry for the way
I've been living my life
I know I've got to change
So from now on tonight
Jesus take the wheel
Take it from my hands
Cause I can't do this all my own
I'm letting go
So give me one more chance
To save me from this road I'm on
Oh, Jesus take the wheel
Oh, I'm letting go
So give me one more chance
Save me from this road I'm on
From this road I'm on
Jesus take the wheel
Oh, take it, take it from me
Oh, why, oh
(End Of POV)
As she finished her song, She fell asleep. But, in her mind, there was something missing. Like having muscular arms around her that belonged to Max. Though, she knew that was gonna take a while.
It seems like yesterday my world fell from the sky
It seems like yesterday I didn’t know how hard I could cry
It feels like tomorrow I may not get by
(Abby’s POV)
My life is now a wreck. My dad is dead, My best friend is going to be charged for murder for killing a boy, and my mom is a wreck because of the death of my father. My whole entire world is falling a part. I have no one to lean on. Or do I? His name is… Max Brady and he’s already been there for me even more then my best friend. I can count on him for anything like right now.
(End of POV)
But I will try
I will try
Wipe the tears from my eyes
“Daddy, why did you have to go?” Abby said while still softly crying. What Abby didn’t know was that Max was at her door when he heard her say that. That’s it. He just had to get her out of the house, away from all the drama. “ Abby can I come in?” Max said. Abby, startled as ever hid her stuff the best she could to make sure Max wouldn’t see it. “ Sure Max, come on in.” Abby replied.
I’m beautifully broken
And I don’t mind if you know it
I’m beautifully broken
Max entered and sat next to Abby on her bed. “ Abby I’m going to take you outside of the house just for a while, If you want” Max asked. “ Um, I’m not sure… well what the heck, it might do me some good to go outside and relax” Abby replied. “ Good, lets go right now grab your coat and put on shoes and lets go!” Max said while taking Abby’s hand into his hand and bringing her downstairs. Abby felt this feeling deep inside her almost as if she was blushing!
And I don’t care if I show it
Everyday is a new day
I’m reminded of my past
(Abby’s POV)
Oh my god! Am I blushing? Ah! I am! Does that mean? No, I cant be in love with him yet his heart belongs to Chelsea, my best friend!
(End of POV)
Every time there’s another storm
I know that it won’t last
Every moment I’m filled with hope ‘cause I get another chance
“Max where are you taking me?” Abby asked while they had just left the house a near 5 minutes ago. “ You’ll see, were almost there” Max replied. A few minutes later they got there. It was a beautiful ice skating rink and it hadn’t even been used yet.
But I will try
I will try
Got nothing
Left to hide
“Wow Max! I love it! How did you know I like to skate?” Abby said. “ Well actually, I didn’t know. Anyway, lets go skating! ” Max replied. “ Okay! But we don’t have any skates” Abby asked.
“Yeah we do, I got them ready before I came at you’re house” Max replied. They laced up their skates and started to go skating.
Without the highs and the lows
Where would we go
Where would we go
“Thanks so much Max, for bringing me out here it made me feel way better” Abby said. “ No problem” Max said. “ But, do you mind if we past my dad’s grave for a minute?” Abby asked. “ Sure, it doesn’t bother me at all” Max replied. When they got there Abby kneeled down and saw something. It was a box and in it was a letter Abby read it and choked on her tears she opened the box and there was a necklace in there for her from… her father. “Max, I’ve got to go” Abby said and ran straight to home without Max getting to say bye and without noticing that she had just dropped her letter. Max read it, and understood he too slowly walked to the Deveraux house and knew it was gonna be a long day of Abby crying.
Song credit:
Beautifully broken- Ashlee Simpson
Unexpected Love chap. 2
(Max’s POV)
I finally caught up to her and I made her turn around. She looked like a broken angel with tears coming out of her blue eyes.
“Abby, I know you’re sad I really do understand so please talk to me I want to help” She looked me straight the eyes as I did the same. “ Do you really mean that?” She asked while still in her voice was complete sadness. “ Yeah… I… I do”
(End of POV)
They were so caught up just looking in their eyes that they didn’t notice the speeding car headed straight for them. They quickly turned after they heard a loud horn beeping but it was too late because right after they turned the car hit Abby sending her higher then the light post itself. All Max could do is stare in shock while his best friend landed hard on the ground. After she had landed on the ground, realization hit Max like a wall. He rushed over to her to check if she had a pulse but he had also already noticed that she was unconscious he’d noticed that the car that had hit Abby had stopped and the engine just turned off. He just saw enough in the shadows to see the person who drove the car. It was a girl. Then, she came out of the shadows it was none other then Chelsea!( reminder: she was in jail) Max was in shock, his girlfriend had just hit his best friend with her car!
-“Hi Max! Aren’t you glad to see me?”
-“Hey… um not right now but why did you hit you’re best friend with a CAR!”
-“I did? I didn’t notice you know? Because I was on the phone and checking my calls”
-“Chelsea, honey…. Please explain what the hell are you doing here! You are supposed to be in jail we all know it!”
-“But Max! I missed you so much that I couldn’t wait! I knocked the guard down and stole his keys so I could see you!”
-“Chelsea please let me take that car! I need to bring Abby to the hospital!”
-“What! Now you’re putting you’re best friend 1st before you’re girlfriend! Some boyfriend!”
-“Chelsea! You’re best friend has been hit by a car actually by you! So please let me take the car!”
-“Fine! But you better surprise me at Valentines with something big.”
After she finished that, Max grabbed Abby and got her in the back seat of the car, he took off his jacket, he put his jacket under her head for some sort of pillow and started up the engine and made his way to the hospital while leaving Chelsea to think about what she had done.
At the hospital…
-“Someone help!”
-“Max what happened to Abby?” Lexie asked
-“Abby…she… she got hit by a car”
-“Okay set her down here and go call her family now!”
On the phone….
-Frankie? It’s me Max, can you and a Jennifer come to the hospital right now?”
-“Of course we’ll be right there”
-“Thanks”
Unexpected Love chap. 3
(Abby’s POV)
Where am I? “Abby? Abigail is that you?” that’s what came from some familiar voice but I wasn’t quite sure from who. I looked down and I saw nothing but white, I looked at myself only to find myself in a white dress I was panicked. Was I dead? Is the only question I could ask myself. I was in shocked I couldn’t speak. All I could do was to let my feet lead me where the voice that asked who was there. It took my feet and me quite a while to get close enough to try to see the person. When I got there I was shocked. I couldn’t move, speak, or anything only stand there and be in shock. There, in front of my face and gates was. My daddy, Jack Deveraux.
(End of POV)
At the hospital…
In a matter of minutes Jennifer and Frankie arrived. Jennifer looked like a wreck.
-“Lexie, where’s my baby!”
-“Jen, calm down she’s in stable condition right now and 3 people at a time can come to see her. So I suppose Jen, Frankie and Max can come in right now”
-“Thanks you Lexie”
-“Max stay here for 2 minutes the police have to ask you some questions”
-“Alright”
Jennifer and Frankie followed Lexie to Abby’s room only to have more and more sadness in their faces.
-“Frankie, look at my baby girl. She seems so peaceful”
-“I know Jen, I know.”
With Max and the police…
-“Do you know where this happened?”
-“Yes, I do It happened West on route 413(I just made it up) about 3 km after that tree with the huge arrow on it”
-“One last question, do you have any idea on who hit Abby Deveraux?”
-“I… I do it was… Chelsea Benson”
-“Commander Brady’s daughter? But I was sure she was in prison after being convicted of murder of a little boy”
-“Yes, she was but she told me she escaped from jail to be with me”
-“Gee boy, you have life hard anyway thank you for your time”
-“No problem”
Max was relived to get that off of his chest. Max suddenly felt a hand on his shoulder. It was his brother, Frankie.
-“ Max go on in and see her, me & Jen already went”
-“Thanks”
(Abby’s POV)
Daddy was all I could say. “Abby, honey what are you doing here?” my father asked I myself wasn’t quite sure so that’s what I said. “I can actually answer that question for you. You were hit by a car by Chelsea to be exact.” He answered. He was right, now I was starting to remember. I desperately wanted to hug my dad so I started to go near the gates. “Abby don’t!” Why! I replied why? Didn’t my dad want me to hug him? “ Abby, wait until, you’re… dead”
(End of POV)
In Abby’s room…
Max had just entered the room soon; heartbreak took the toll on him. She looked like she was a broken angel again. Like if he hadn’t even helped her at all.
-“Abby, this is all my fault I should have been there for you! I wasn’t… I’m so sorry can you ever forgive me? No, you can’t I’m going to stay here until you get better and I’ll make sure of it!”
(Abby’s POV)
It had finally hit me I was in heaven. I couldn’t even tell my father from what I completely remembered before I had gotten hit. It was when I found my new necklace from him and I was running away from Max. God, I miss Max so much there’s no way to describe it
I just wish he could hold me in his arms again like he did before I got hit. I wonder how is he doing. I ask my father that; the gate opens, he steps out and tells me to look down. I was scared at the beginning but my courage got up so I looked down. There, I was shocked I saw me, in the hospital bed with Max next to me putting his fingers through my hair. He looked so scared that I was going to die and at the same time he looked disappointed like if he could have protected me more. He looked sad like if he wanted him to take my place. I couldn’t look anymore. I turned away to see my father with only sadness in his eyes like if he read my mind. I ran straight to him without any obstacles in the way and I engulfed him in a hug. Then, I let all my tears come down.
(End of POV)
At the hospital…
Everyone who knows Abby came, with all sadness in their faces. They couldn’t believe that Chelsea out of all people hit her with a car. One at a time but with Max never leaving the room. Everyone had past; almost everyone had gone home except for Max. He didn’t care the only thing right now that he cared about was Abby.
(Max’s POV)
God! I’m so stupid! I think I’m in love with Abby! Why does these feelings come at the time she’s in at the hospital! That’s it! Don’t worry Abby I’ll be back, I promise. I just have something to do at jail.
(End of POV)
As of that Max got up and left for the Salem Prison.
In “Heaven”…
(Abby’s POV)
I finally let go of my father. He told me he had to go. I accepted it, but I didn’t accept that I was dead. No, not yet I saw a forest behind me so I practically ran there. There, I sat down, my back against the tree and started to sing.
She was driving last Friday on her way to Cincinnati
On a snow white Christmas Eve
Going home to see her Mama and her Daddy with the baby in the backseat
Fifty miles to go and she was running low on faith and gasoline
It been a long hard year
She had a lot on her mind and she didn't pay attention
She was going way to fast
Before she knew it she was spinning on a thin black sheet of glass
She saw both their lives flash before her eyes
She didn't even have time to cry
She was sooo scared
She threw her hands up in the air
Jesus take the wheel
Take it from my hands
Cause I can't do this all on my own
I'm letting go
So give me one more chance
To save me from this road I'm on
Jesus take the wheel
It was still getting colder when she made it to the shoulder
And the car came to a stop
She cried when she saw that baby in the backseat sleeping like a rock
And for the first time in a long time
She bowed her head to pray
She said I'm sorry for the way
I've been living my life
I know I've got to change
So from now on tonight
Jesus take the wheel
Take it from my hands
Cause I can't do this all my own
I'm letting go
So give me one more chance
To save me from this road I'm on
Oh, Jesus take the wheel
Oh, I'm letting go
So give me one more chance
Save me from this road I'm on
From this road I'm on
Jesus take the wheel
Oh, take it, take it from me
Oh, why, oh
(End Of POV)
As she finished her song, She fell asleep. But, in her mind, there was something missing. Like having muscular arms around her that belonged to Max. Though, she knew that was gonna take a while.
